Description Dump

Many furry authors decide to dump the totality of a character's description into one paragraph, the paragraph that follows their entrance, leaving the rest of the story devoid of adequate descriptions of the character.&#160; You're just supposed to refer back to the opening paragraph and imagine...especially imagining what it's like to have an author who builds details as he goes along. "I know the feeling," Another voice put in. "I was terribly let down when I found out that ships didn't have big spoked wheels like in all the storybooks." Apple Blossom turned hir head and beheld a bipedal humanoid creature resembling an enormous, shaggy black dog. He wore a tunic like Apple Blossom's but his shoulder boards carried only three stripes. He also wore gray slacks secured by a black belt but no shoes. -from "Witch of November"